The is the letter for my love,Can you give me some idea .How can l do it better?

Question

DearXXX:
How are you?Time also can make people forget anything,but however l can't to forget you.In fact ,l miss you all the time.
l also see the photo to you,you look very nice,like to be my prince.Yes you is my prince.Do you know?After you left me,l cry..l cry in that night..
l love you,l really love you.That not a lies.l hope you can belive me.Did you ever love me?Please answer this qustion,it was very important for me.If you answer you haven't love me,maybe l will give up you,beause the feel of wait you is not good..!
Are you happy now?l hope you can happy everyday.Beause you is my happiness..
Love is a moble feelin.It was living in our hearts.In my heart,you is the most important.No one is important that you.
Do you know?You is very important for me.If you left me.I will be unhappy,upset..
We not meet for 4 month,but however l can see you anywhere.In my dream?Daydream?Photo???
Sometime.l think l am so silly.Why that l love you so much.Are you think so?Do you think l am so silly?
A proverb say:love one don't need any terms,l think so.l love you for no terms.I hope you can love me.It is impossible?But however l will be wait,l don't mind the time for how long..l wait you
l don't know what will you think for my prodamation,but however l don't mind.lf you don't like it,you can't tell me.l will be change.
Can you give an opening with me?l will do my best.l hope we can togerter..
Next year l will study in German.Can you tell me which school are you study in?Beause l hope l can study with you..Please.
Sorry for my long mail,l hope you can forgive me..
XXXXX l love you forever..ever

Answer 1

I wouldn't make it too soppy, woman don't really like that kind of thing.

Answer 2

You shouldn't be asking the whole world how to write a letter to the love of your life. This should be extremely private and personal and we should not be privy to it. Your letter is not spelled properly. "Prodamation"? What does that mean? English is obviously not your first language. Is your love English? If not, you should write your letter in the language your love speaks. The letter as it stands does not make sense. Other than that, the sentiments are lovely, and I am sure your girlfriend will be very happy.

Answer 3

there are alot of errors in it though but honestly if i was the one getting this letter i'd be freaked out...and simply disturbed. but it's up to you, if you know the person so well you should know whether or not they would like this letter, base on their personality. ps: jus don't make the final draft sound like you are in NEED of this person, only if you are 100% sure they wouldn't break your heart.



in this case somehow i don't get the feeling that your love is reciprocated... but think this through before you send it. :-)



i also assume that english is not your first language... but all the best , hope it worked out.

Answer 4

First you may want to do spell check and have someone edit it because there are a lot of grammer mistakes. Second it doesn't matter what you say as long as you are honest and mean what you say. Don't just say what you think someone wants to hear, speak from the heart. Thats the best you can do.

Answer 5

sorry but if the person has dumped you, this isnt going to work.

no end of writing will, you need to move on with your life and concentrate on new things. you will meet someone right for you.

Answer 6

I don't think I would send this - not unless she is totally in love with you also....and you know this for sure...If you are both in love with each other - then send it. Good luck.